Subject: Re: A Son's Duty, Chapter six, Final version
From: White Wolf
Date: 9/28/1995, 11:12 PM
To: fanfic@andrew.cais.com

On Thu, 28 Sep 1995, Hitomi Ichinohei wrote:

On 28 Sep 1995, Ben L. Harrison wrote:

Your paragraph about Ranma gaining insites was a very well done addition
to a fine chapter.

Thank you for the compliment.  I think that others are more deserving of 
compliments however, such as Twister and Bert.

	Hitomi, you already know my opinion on your not accepting 
compliments.  But, this is not about that.  Actually, I am un-impressed 
with Bert's work.  The writing is fine, but the story seems almost a 
shallow cross section of what it could be.  Twister's is much better done.


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