I DID IT!!!!!

My first real fanfic - I'm so proud.  YAH!!!!!

uh...waitaminute - if you guys (and ladies) read it....uh-oh...
*ACK*  this means I have to get critiqued!

Hooboy - somehow I think I'm in trouble....  ;)

it's my first...be gentle.

AlberCrombie.
                                                                           
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       "It's not the one bullet with your name on it that you have to worry  
         about; it's the twenty thousand-odd rounds labeled `occupant.'"   
                                     --Murphy's Laws of Combat