I DID IT!!!!!

My first real fanfic - I'm so proud.  YAH!!!!!

uh...waitaminute - if you guys (and ladies) read it....uh-oh...
*ACK*  this means I have to get critiqued!

Hooboy - somehow I think I'm in trouble....  ;)

it's my first...be gentle.

AlberCrombie.

        I like it, it made me laugh.  It's also been a long time since I've
seen something with an ending, sorta.  Do you plan to write smething that
follows?
        I suppose the Kuno's are the only ones that don't know about Ranma.
Although I'd like to see Kuno's reaction when Shampoo hugs Ranma-chan.  8)
        *sigh*  I guess it's time I got back to my story...
        *shake head in dismay*

           --.\\ousse \_ee
   mousse@pixi.com
   http://www.pixi.com/~mousse/
   "Ora no waza o, tejina yobawari suru ki ka?"
   "Still deperately seeking Shampoo."