Subject: WillA Comment's and Questions ....
From: beaubienrd@mala.bc.ca
Date: 11/2/1995, 3:43 PM
To: fanfic@andrew.cais.com

Just finished reading WillA in the long backlog of Fanfic's in my 
Mailbox , and aside from the text wrap the story was a very good 
Ranma 1/2 drama (I did not like the power Ranger commerical , though . 
I don't think it has a place in a serious Fanfic , IMSO ) ,
I just have a couple of question's and comment's ...

How much reasearch have you done on the pscholigcial effect's of rape 
on woman ? From the way your story read's , it sound's like you have 
at least done some research on the topic , and your Fanfic resolution 
may depend on some research done on this topic . 

Also , I did not like the way Ukyou reacted initaly to Akane . IMHO , 
Ukyou doesn't hate Akane , and therefore would not react the way she 
did when Akane visted Ucchan's . 

But everthing considered , it's a good Fanfic . I would like to see 
the new Shampoo/Akane relationship explored in future chapter's 
though . 

Just my 2 cents/yen worth ...

Ja ne!!

Richard Beaubien