Just finished reading WillA in the long backlog of Fanfic's in my
Mailbox , and aside from the text wrap the story was a very good
Ranma 1/2 drama (I did not like the power Ranger commerical , though .
I don't think it has a place in a serious Fanfic , IMSO ) ,
I just have a couple of question's and comment's ...
How much reasearch have you done on the pscholigcial effect's of rape
on woman ? From the way your story read's , it sound's like you have
at least done some research on the topic , and your Fanfic resolution
may depend on some research done on this topic .
Also , I did not like the way Ukyou reacted initaly to Akane . IMHO ,
Ukyou doesn't hate Akane , and therefore would not react the way she
did when Akane visted Ucchan's .
But everthing considered , it's a good Fanfic . I would like to see
the new Shampoo/Akane relationship explored in future chapter's
though .
Just my 2 cents/yen worth ...
Ja ne!!
Richard Beaubien