On Mon, 6 Nov 1995, Brian wrote:

AAAGGGGGGGGGRRRRRR...... I SUBMIT TO YOUR SUPERRIOR WRITING!! You are 
the best!!  I LOVE it, and..... its getting better... arg, this 
sucks, write more...... SOON!!

Oh enough!

OK, one little problem... Ranma-cat would sence Cologne sneeking up 
on him, and she would not be able to just knock him out... she CAN'T 
beat Ranma-cat.. as we have already seen.  Anyways, who carse, your 
story is awasome however you write it, so ignore that problem.  

Ranma-neko is just a *bit* busy at that moment you know.

LOVED male Ranma saying he would KILL Shampoo, a good touch... and a 
better one where he says the same to Cologne. and hell, he has the 
right to...

Yeah, yeah, whatever.  

LOVED, AND HATED the end of the chapter where Ryoga ENTERS THE 
STORY.... " WHY DO YOU HAVE TO DO THAT TO US AGAIN & AGAIN ? " I 
beleave he may want to kill Shampoo too, but he will have to attack 
Ranma first before he realises who really KILLED her.. this is Ryoga, 
and whenever anything happones to her, its AUTOMATICLY Ranma's fault 
( at first ) 

Duh.  ^_^

Well, when you write your first book, can i be a beta reader??? I 
think if you write as good as this at 13, your going to be AMAISING 
at 18!!

Or burned out...

Well, hurry with 9 and beyond....... love ya, ( and not in that way 
for the HENTAIS of the ML ) =]

heh heh...

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