On Mon, 27 Nov 1995 Windlily@aol.com wrote:

O.K. I got a enough interest about this to post it. It is a Ranma 1/2 story
and a lemon. So if either of those things bother you, please don't read it!

For those of you who do read it, any C&C (positive or negative) would be
appreciated.

Thanks.
Shannon

(I am not hentai! I am not hentai! Well...maybe just a little bit....)

	Suuurrrreeee ;)
	Actually, I liked it.  Good plot, good characterization, touching
to the point of being slightly mushy, and extremely well written.  A good
point was how you addressed the fact that neither Ranma or Akane realized
at first how much the other cared for them.
	Now for a few specifics:
	Ranma's fear of the _possibility_ of harming Akane was excellent.
	Dr. Ojai: I like her (how extensive _was_ that book anyway? :)
	"I'm not a pervert, I'm a guy!" Uh-huh, sure, tell me another one 
(I know _I'd_ be. . . experimenting if I were in his shoes ;)

	Keep up the good work.
	
HTG