Hm.... let's see... where to begin...

1) The way Mousse & Shampoo are interacting.  I like it.  It makes
   sense.  After all, they've known each other for a long time, no?

1.1)  "Okonomiyaki critter"?   Hm.... ;)

2) Outside of a Lemon, there really hasn't been too many fanfics that take
   into account that Ukyo spent alot of time with the mindset that she
   was a _man_.  Interesting twist to it...

3) You killed Kodachi?  Eeek.  Boy, will Kuno be pissed.  Or will he.
   I dunno.

-Rod M