Woman: *That has got to be the saddest boy I've ever seen....*

I guess she has never seen Ryoga 
 

(Akane is in a different part of the outskirts of Nerima; she's riding a
skateboard, and looks extremely worried)

Riding a SKATEBORD??
 

Akane: *If I know Ranma, he's going to go to China; and as much as I
want to explain things, there's no way I could find a way to get there*
(Stops to take a rest) *So it's either I find him now or never see him
again* (Looks at skateboard) *I'm so tired... I can't possibly go any
further. I'm sorry Ranma... I tried, I really did.*
(Lowers her head, and closes her eyes)

He will come back.... Let him go fool.... He come back as a FULL MAN... what
an idiot sje is! *sigh* 
 

Ranma: (Incredulously) R-really?

Ranma once said that Ryoga & Akane were as dumn as a pile of rocks..... The
only ROCK HEAD i see is Ranma Saotome.

 

Nahh.. it was an ok chapter =]
 

Chapter 23

P-Ran: (Holding a bucket of water) *Lesse... I know Mousse has been
locked up as a duck again, Cologne if off visiting one of her friends... 
which means Shampoo is all alone* (Starts cracking his knuckles) 
Which also means Shampoo can scream as loudly as she likes, and no
one will help her... 

Humm.. mabey you changed it from BETA X.. i HOPE so =]
 

(P-Ran-chan gets up, running to Shampoo's back. Shampoo turns
around at the last minute, holding a knife in her hand. P-Ran-chan
stops before she runs her stomach right into the sharp blade, but
Shampoo still manages to lodge it into her left arm)

Ok, this time he went looking for her, but assides from that.. i have a bad
fealing its going to be the same result =[ 


grr.. *sigh*

Chapter  24

Ok, ok, i still liked it....  Mabey Shampoo will run into the street and get
hit by a bus, or something?? *hopes*  Well... its not over is it??  NO! it
cant be....  we still have some questions to figure out...

What hapons to Shampoo?

How P-Ran get back in time?

How has Nabiki profited?

Ranma & Akane's love to be explored?

Etc...

well, i await more, talk to you on #ranma!  later ISABEL!

*Sage zaps Isabel

heh heh 

	I really no like Shampoo, though I speak much like her 
right now. Anyway, I think living is a worse punishment than
dying; and I did need something to make P-Ran a little nicer,
he was SUPPOSED to be a nice guy. Though his motives here aren't
all that sweet.

its ok.. =]

	Isabel Arantes ( Lum )

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"Curse those evil Octopi"
"I went to the Tendo Dojo and all I got was this stupid Sig."
"To infinity, and beyond!"
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