Dodekain, (and thank you Brian for posting it!) I really enjoyed this fanfic
that you have written! And who is this 'little man with six-foot staff?'
Anyway related to Colone, somehow?  I cannot wait to read Chapter 4 of this
series!

There is small problems in your story, just a minor one:

	"Uhhh, your not Ranma," Ryoga mutters.

I think it should be "'Uhhh, you're not Ranma,' Ryoga mutters." instead of
above.  The full statement was to be 'You are not Ramna.'  The conjucation
of it is 'You're not Ramna.'

( It may seem trivial, but being a son of an English teacher, it's always
hard to overlook errors such as that.  Think of me as a human grammer-checker. )
Ozymandias aka Jon Quirit
E-mail: ozymand@netzone.com
IRC: Ozymand

Question to all: What if Sailormoon had mecha?  What would they be like?