Uh....ok.

        This is my very first crtitique of someone else's writing.

I must say, I was very excited that the story was about Kuno, my favorite
character in the whole of Ranma 1/2. But Kuno won't talk that way. Has he a  
head injury? One serious enough to make him forget that he talks like he was
Shakespere-gotten. And he tried to commit suicide when he was younger? Come
on! The man who thinks he's god's gift to women must have thought so at a very
early age.

Shanika