At 10:13 AM 27/2/96 -0500, Ben Kosse wrote:

    First (on the Passion Spice note), thank you very much for telling >>>WW that Jody was with me (I'm a dead man!)

That wasn't me! I was the smart-ass who made the comment about the
ratio of "2 guys to 1 girl school". I stll think that's enough girls for 2 guys
to get a date<g>

    Are you sure? I thought it was "Panda" who told WW that Jody was over
here.... :)
    And you KNOW WHAT I MENT! (there's 14,000 students, about 9750 >guys and the rest girls) JEEZE!

I'm sure. I wasn't following the thread but decided to jump in and see what
all the noise was about. The quotes for that thread were getting out of hand
so it's pretty easy to mix up the original quoter :) 

    But, before I'm gutted, I must say that I've not gone over the prologue
with a fine-toothed comb (more like a large, broken garden rake), but >>>from what I've read, it's a definite improvement. Keep it up.

Thanks Ben. I've been getting some comments that there should have >>been more background given (which to a certain degree I agree with). The >>new section for the prologue is just a setup for later events. I didn't think
it gave away too much. I just realized that considering the next chapter's
events, I had to tie Dr. Stingray with Dr. Raven early on. Chapter 9 "The
Enemy Within" will reveal a little more about what happened but will
hopefully leave the reader still wondering what's going on. I hope ;)

   I'll gut it this spring break.... :)

Chapter 9 should hit the ML in a few days. It's being "gutted" by the best
in the business right now<g>

BTW: Chapter 10's title is "The Ghost of a Chance". Any Rush fans on the
ML? Check some of the other chapter titles<g>

    I noticed.

^_^ If I can think of enough ideas, I might actually be able to write a BGC
fanfic called "2112". Of course the KS will all be long dead, but maybe the
next generation can-  . . . Nah ;)

Panda

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