On Thu, 29 Feb 1996, Andy Skuse wrote:

At 11:36 PM 28/2/96 +0000, you wrote:

Okay, well written, but some real continuity failures, starting 
around the time Priss gets on the bike.

This sequence makes no sense. Priss seems to hop in and out of her 
HS, and Mackie casually reveals to anybody whos watching or 
listening, who one of the KS is. AND unless the back of the van is 
soundproof, Blackie can hear everything as well.

One answer for ya Andrew. Read the first 8 chaps og BG Cross and it will
make a lot more sense. The story takes place in the year 2038 an A LOT of
things have changed <GGG>

I've read all the chapters of BG Cross... we know that Leon knows about 
them, but we assume that the Knight Sabers don't wany anyone else knowing 
who they are.  Some of those are legitimate problems, anyone watching will 
wonder how/why Leon is such good buddies with the Knight Sabers.  
And Blackie isn't supposed to know who they are until Priss yells 
at him in Raven's Garage, right?

Recap:

Priss: Stopped at accident, talking to Leon. (still in hardsuit?)
Sylia: In van, pulls up at accident. (still in hardsuit?)
Mackie: Calls Sylia 'Sis' while handing finger to Leon. (not hidden
            from view)

But the fight sequences are turning too much to martial arts battles (not
the KS, how Blackie was fighting).  I'm seeing this in other fanfics 
as well.  The KS use strategy to maneuver a Boomer in line with their main
weapons.  Punching and kicking is going to damage both your suit and the
boomers... and the boomers are supposed to be heavily armoured unlike our 
hardsuited friends.  If they are going to punch/kick it's to keep the 
boomer off balance (unless they're firing knuckle/ankle bombers, or 
explosives inserters).

BTW, BGCross is turning out to be a great fanfic, and continuation of the 
BGC universe.  Keep up the good work!

Salomon Farin                                              sfarin@netcom.com