Subject: Re: [FanFic] [C and C] Mystery Fanfic Commentary Theatre 3000 comments on "Natsumi, the Magical Girl, chapter one."
From: "Ranma al'Thor <ranma@falcon.cc.ukans.edu>" <ranma@falcon.cc.ukans.edu>
Date: 3/5/1996, 6:33 PM
To: fanfic@tendo-dojo.ranma.net

On Mon, 4 Mar 1996, Yeah It's Me wrote:



On Mon, 4 Mar 1996, Ranma al'Thor <ranma@falcon.cc.ukans.edu> wrote:


Jadeite:  Great.  More mindless slaughter of my oppressed Youma kindred.  
By some annoying little cheerful girl.

Ami:  Sounds great!

I don't know why, but I really like that dialogue.

Bailesu:  Thanks!
  

Tokyo, Japan: Nerima district.  Sometime in the past...

Jadeite:  Well, that's nice and vague...could be any time from yesterday 
to the Big bang.

This one too, why do the really annoying and obnoxious reviewers get the 
good lines?

Ami:  I think Dr. Price injects them with sarcasm drugs before he sends 
them up...

    > > 
Ami:  [thinking]  No flashback.  Please, no flashback.

Ami does make a pretty good foil for the revolving door reviewer.

Ami:  Thanks!
  
Jadeite:  At the dojo, announcing it's engaged to Ranma, of course.

Bailesu:  Ahh....didn't think of that.

It could also be trying to kidnap Akane for some weird youma reason.

Bailesu:  True.  There are some male youma...

Ami:  Hai!
 
Bailesu:  I swear, next time we ought to just kill the guest commentator 
ourselves and spare the wear and tear on this place...

Ami:  Yep.

Then it wouldn't be as much fun to watch/read them be destroyed.

Ami:  But we'd have a lot less stress!
 
 
Lovely reviews please keep them up.

Bailesu:  We will!
 


John Walter Biles :  MA-History, Ph.D Wannabe at U. Kansas         
ranma@falcon.cc.ukans.edu   http://falcon.cc.ukans.edu/~ranma/falcon.html 
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