Subject: Re: [FanFic] Story: Revolution #9
From: Matthew Trotter
Date: 3/7/1996, 8:41 AM
To: fanfic@tendo-dojo.ranma.net

When I was a kid I half-believed this paranoid idea that everybody 
else possessed magical powers which they only used when I wasn't around.

Odd, I always thought: What if I'm uncontious and babbling weird things...
    What if the past three days were a halucination and I'm actualy 
    sitting on the gym floor trying to take a bath or eat my shoe for 
    lunch.  My immagination has not always been my friend . . .

I tried to capture that feeling with this fic.

It worked.  It had that "Naked Lunch" feel to it . . . well sort of . . 

wrote a generic romantic plot to fit them into and added some other 
stuff in.  

Sigh, I liked the romantic version better . . . but then I'm just a 
sucker for that stuff . . . generic brand Ranma . . . I think you did a 
good job, even for generic plot . . .

I find this/these fic/s entertaining, but I also find 
"Childhood's End" entertaining, so I guess my opinions are wrong.

Opinions can't be wrong, unless you change your mind.

Matthew Trotter, Speaking as an authority, bla bla blablabla

P.S.
   Childhood's End: I didn't think it was too good.  <insert everyone 
elses rag here> But when it was over it still left me with the feel of 
the original [Clark(?)'s Childhood's End].  That says something for it.  
Warning: if you didn't like the fanfic, you probably won't like Clark's 
book, its not very Ranmaish either . . .[thhpt]
   -MJT