Hmmm...Quite interesting...

I am curious as to how you intend to increase Akane's "Attractiveness Factor".

...Akane is trying to increase her own attractiveness by reading up and 
learning to act "sensual."  I leave it up to you as to whether
or not this is a mistake. (The Ranma cast has a knack for making
misconceptions and acting on them ^_^)

Akane has always tended to be rather inept at such things.

Yep ^_^ At the end, I tried to compare her cooking skill to what her skill
in "attractiveness" is.

:"Ranma will forget about those two idiots when I get through with him!  The
:best two ways to a man's heart are food and this!  I can be good at 'this' in
:no time!"

Overall, the story looks good and has a lot of potential.  Whether you lemon
it or not, I look forward to the next installment.

Thanks! ^_^

Signed, PhoneyNT
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