Not much to say.  It was a really good story.  However, the setting seem to make 
the development for romance even harder (as if it wasn't hard enough already).  
Since I don't know much about mechwarrior, I won't argue about the technical 
specs of your fanfic.  By the way, I really love having Shampoo in love with 
Mousse and being ignored by Mousse.  It is about time Shampoo pays for being so 
cold to Mousse all the time! Keep up the good work!

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"Gave me your best shot... if you're prepared for the void!"  Magus from Chrono 
Trigger

"However Akane, when you laugh, you're cute!" Ranma-kun from Lambada Ranma
(dakedo Akane  warau to kawaii yo)

Don Wang at <dwang@sprynet.com>
A devoted RPG and strategy game fan and Ranma 1/2 fan.
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