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    Does this mean Priss is going to belt Bert many times for just about
turning her into a nympho by the end of Zone #9. :)

Ben!!!  Tone down the hentai thoughts from over there, will you?  ;)
I'm not turning anyone nympho.  I'm just happily writing away!  ^_^

     OK. Like I said above, you didn't turn Priss into a sex-starved nympho,
but, as I said in the gigantic post which should distributed in about 20
mins after I send this one), from the "Do blondes have as much fun?" joke by
you in Hot Legs, to the end of the story, there's an explicit (not lemony)
or implicit mention of Bert being wanted by Priss in more ways than one.
     I wasn't thinking anything along hentai lines (though I was LMAO at the
blondes joke scene) when I read the story (I spend 2 hours one night, then
16 hours the next day--including eating--reading your trilogy-length fanfic,
part of the response might have been the 4am--today, Sunday--finish time,
and that I was reading in stuff from prior scenes).
     But, read the longer post, and let me know. It might not have been
intentional for Priss to come across like that, but at the time I read it,
and when I read it again today, it seemed she wanted in Bert's pants quite a
bit. Yes, she was physically expressing her non-physical love, but she might not
have had to be quite as direct, maybe? I dunno.

Besides, if anyone was going to get me it'd probably be Sylia for all the
hassle I've put her through!  ^_^

     And Nene. Though, if you want my opinion, you should eventually
reconcile with her. I mean, just think of the hair your kids would have! :)

Anyway, I've got a pile of stuff I'd like to talk to you about (with regards
to the story), and I'd like to do it in real time, sometime. Do you have
access to a talk program (my IRC client isn't working--at ALL. I think RIT
is cracking down....)? Can you mail back privately? thanks.
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Ben Kosse bmk7411@cs.rit.edu
Homepage with anime and other interests. (http://www.rit.edu/~bmk7411)
Biggest BGC otaku on the RIT campus (especially Priss).
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Author of the Bubblegum Crisis theme pack