Subject: Re: [FFML] [Fanfic] Smoke and Mirrors - Part 1
From: foxxx@comox.island.net (Foxx & Musica Zodiak)
Date: 4/29/1996, 4:38 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com


On Mon, 29 Apr 1996, Foxx & Musica Zodiak wrote:

Am I the only one who got the ends of the paragraphs chopped off in this 
fanfic for some reason?

Nah, I got 'em too.... was a good fanfic... who wrote it?

so did I, what's up with that.  Aside from that, it looks good!


arggg!  It supposed to be like that.  Where it cuts off is where they all
get blown into little bits of Ranma character.  It usually means something
in a story when an "error" like that is consistantly repeated.  I thought
the way it was cut off, along with the use of an outside character that
was hit just as quickly but survived to see the aftermath, worked very
well.

Y'know, that was what I thought in the first place....