I agree with all of those people who say that this was an incredible 
great and enjoyable peice of writing.  The only thing I didnt like 
was Nabikis action with the song.  I realy like how the charichters 
acted and how you described their emotions.  

Nabiki and the song is already history.  It won't be in the rewrite.

She's still the Devil;'s Advocate, but doesn't do that.

Thanks.

--Sean Gaffney
--"YOu git!  I thought you were dead!  Git git git!" - Benny, No Future