An interesting job.  The flashes from one scene to another were well 
done, as were the feelings coming from the group.  I had to smile when 
Ranma actually got a little backbone.  The numbers for the children's 
names were a little disconcerting, but I imagine that will be corrected 
in time.  Keep it up (and post the final draft on the remailer!!!)
 
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