Subject: Re: [FFML] [fanfic]Life Falls Apart
From: Wing & Nagisa <wwong8@calstatela.edu>
Date: 5/4/1996, 11:33 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

On Sat, 4 May 1996, Harvey Torrance Griffin wrote:

Orig> 	Well written, but the subject matter.... excuse me while I slit
Orig> my wrists :P
Orig> 	You _really_ hate Shampoo for some reason, don't you Izzy-chan?
Orig> HTG

Just my opinion, but it didn't sound like hate in the story... It's
possible in Shampoo to hit such a point.  It's tragic. It's sad.  But it's
not unrealistic, considering her attitude in life and towards life.
*smiles*  It may sound cruel, but then again, not every ending is all nice
and rosy... there are some dead ends and sad snippages.  This is one.

Wing. [ I personally liked it, but not because of the fact that Shampoo
	will die, but because of the emotional strengths and currents
	that flow within the story. ]

 @}--,--'-------- "Steps" -------,--'---{@
  A moment passes by. A step taken without
  knowing why...      Things to be are...
                 ..Unkown.
 @}--,--'-------   Wing   -------,--'---{@
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