Hey everyone!  I normally ask for lots of input and often get it but
don't really do much about it... now I'd like to take the time to go back and
fix LP# 1, 2, & 3 based on your input.  I'll go back, make corrections, do
rewrites... whatever.  I change writing styles often (sometimes on purpose) 
and would like to be a bit more consistant.
        Is there anything I should cut back or expand?  For instance, I was
half-way through LP#3 when I realized I didn't have much lemon so I stuffed
the end full of it... should I have spread more lemon throughout?  Or shorten
the beginning to get to it sooner?  Or have less lemon, period?  The last
scene in LP#3 (with the *green* not red glowing eyes), should it be cut out
as it restricts LP#4 or should I keep it for the suspense?
        It's this kind of help I'd like to get from the mailing list... even
minor spelling/grammar/etc. mistakes pointed out would be appreciated.  Well
thanks, I hope to hear from you soon.  Oh yeah... I also *need* a title!


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