On Sat, 4 May 1996, Mike W. Loader wrote:

   Yet more good stuff from the elf. I liked it. Nice method of pulling
all the pieces together; having Sham. and Linna show up was both
unexpected and delightful.

Thanks.

   Nodoka is Ranma's grandfather? Was there an acident with a cursed pool
and the Nanban mirror? ;)

Y'all aren't gonna let me live that down, are you?  Yes, I messed up.  
Yes, it will get corrected on the final version, probably posted on 
Tuesday (sorry, finals on Monday, so I can't work on it until then)

   I would have liked to have seen a bit more of Nodoka's training. As it
is, she seems almost two-dimentional.

Sorry if she seems that way now.  I've been concentrating on the BGC crew 
and how they have been handling their water problems.  Fortunately, there 
will be more when I return...

   One wonders if Shampoo will take up her puruit where she left off. With
a little more decorum, of course...

I'm still debating that one.  Ucchan's married, so she's out...Akane's 
dead...Kodachi is somewhere else (and no, she is _not_ making an 
appearance...of course, I said the same thing about Ukyou once...)
Such a pursuit, away from the old Akane-Ukyou-Shamps competition, would be 
something to see...She would definitely be less persistent this time, 
probably closer to Ukyou in the current Ranma stuff...wanting him, but 
not so much as to use various spices or magical items to get him.  

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