An excellent, well thought-out series. The characters, new and old, are
well portrayed and likeable. Particularly admirable is that even with the
current wave of sadfics, the author has refrained from turning this into a
"So-and-So is dead, So-and-So's life is ruined, etc." fic. Everyone seems
to have resolved most of their differences. Enjoyable reading,
entertaining, and easy on the soul.
Thanks, although not everything is perfect. While Ukyou and Akane are now
friends, the Best I think She and Shampoo will have is a truce, so there is
still some tension.
A couple of things - Where's Ryoga? He seems to have vanished off the
face of the earth, not even a mention of him.
They are still in contact, I've just not come up with the stories for it
yet. And at this time Akane is thinking about her rivals for Ranma and her
children, not those who were after her 'hand'.
One thing I'm thinking of is that by now she knows about Ryoga's curse, but
neither Ranma or Ryoga know she knows. How? I'm thinking of a pair of very
sloshed male martial artist who are not at their normal level of alertness.
Quiz yourself on the correct usage of punctuation. That was my only
real fault with the story. It suceeds despite this, but correct use of
grammar would push this out of the "good" catagory and into the
"excellent".
Yeah I will have to go over it again before posting it on the reamiler and
then RAAC.
Blame part of it on having to write offical letters so often for so long.
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Anime Excuse #212: Went on a mission with the Lovely Angels
Anime Excuse #213: Tried to help Linna start her car