On Tue, 28 May 1996, Jack Ji wrote:
On Tue, 28 May 1996, Mr. the Rutsch wrote:
I really think you should consider not making the lemon side-story of your
FF publically available. (snip)
Well, I didn't plan on making it publicily availible but I do plan on
posting it on this ML os that I don't get 20 people asking me to e-mail
them the copy.
Um....I think that's wot he meant by "Publically available". I happen to
agree with him. (See my earlier comment)
In addition, it's pretty much the nature of self-insert things that, in
terms of the story, readers don't really care about the self-inserted
author. The inserted author can only be appreciated as a Joe
Average...not supposed to be interesting, as much as providing an
alternate viewpoint to the anime universe. It seems to be the general
concensus of everybody who ever lived that graphic written descriptions
of sex aren't interesting in and of themselves, but can be an interesting
plot device between interesting characters...so it's hard to justify a
lemon Shampoo/author scene.
Well, If I didn't, I'm not gin't do put it in first person. That's too
Huh? Translation?
hard. Well, maybe you'll change your opinion once you see HOW did it.
Or maybe not. Write it if you have to, but make it request only.
- Mike of No Particular Title or Handle
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