| Subject: Re: [FFML] [FanFic] Operation: Reality Check #16 |
| From: Philip Mak |
| Date: 5/31/1996, 7:33 PM |
| To: fanfic@fanfic.COM |
Generally a well done episode... how about a little bit more emphasis on Mike and Mina's relationship though? BTW, about the poems at the beginning, just a thought... would you be able to write the episodes faster if you skipped the poems? :)