Subject: Re: [FFML] [FanFic] Operation: Reality Check #16
From: Philip Mak
Date: 5/31/1996, 7:33 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.COM

Generally a well done episode... how about a little bit more emphasis on 
Mike and Mina's relationship though? BTW, about the poems at the 
beginning, just a thought... would you be able to write the episodes 
faster if you skipped the poems? :)