On Sun, 2 Jun 1996, Shannon and Tim Richmeyer wrote:

Well, which of these did you like better?  I still kinda like the first
one for its stream-of-consciousness image; but I also like the third one
- it's a little more graphic.  Which do you think evokes a better image
of terror and despair?

The last one.

It just fits in better with the rest of the story and doesn't look as 
rushed as the original.

Little Windlily
(dragoncritter@overyonder.com)

Kergma
(chaos@downunder.au)

;)