On Thu, 13 Jun 1996, Richard D. Lawson wrote:

Normally, endings are my strong suit.  However, I had no idea what the 
last line or paragraph of this story should be.  I sat for TWO HOURS 
trying to come up with an ending.  At one point, I actually wrote:  "It 
was unfortunate that a thermonuclear bomb detonated at that very 
moment."

You're right.  That very last line sucked.  ^_^

Heh.

Here's my suggestions...

#1.

	A perfect moment.

#2.

	Akane looked up to see the stars reflected in his eyes.

#3.

	Akane started.  Was that an oink?

#4.

	The other girls never really had a chance.

#5.

	Now they're going to call me a pervert too.

#6.

	"Ranma no baka!  What took you so long?!?"


Let me know if these give you any ideas...  I have lots more.