White Wolf wrote:
Normally, endings are my strong suit. However, I had no
idea what the last line or paragraph of this story should be.
You're right. That very last line sucked. ^_^
Here's my suggestions...
#1. A perfect moment.
Eh. <waggles hand>
#2. Akane looked up to see the stars reflected in his eyes.
Very close to mine; I still am not sure I like it.
#3. Akane started. Was that an oink?
ROFL! Would be a good lead-in to my Ryoga story, neh?
#4. The other girls never really had a chance.
This one I like. A good candidate.
#5. Now they're going to call me a pervert too.
Also funny. :)
#6. "Ranma no baka! What took you so long?!?"
Wouldn't be Akane if she didn't yell at Ranma, neh? :)
Thanks for the suggestions; I particularly liked #4. I'll let you know
if I decide to use it.