Very nice close. And here I was just getting ready to mail off a
fla...er...reminder to you asking to finish it. :)
   The horror scene in the shadows was a very, very nasty piece of work.
Very. You are a truly sick person who needs lots and lots of treatment. It
makes me rather more eaer to see that Atmosfear fic of yours than I was.
   Crusifiying Kasumi....gah....
   Am I the only one who found the line; "Outside, a dog barked" rather
amusing?
   The end left me....I dunno....feeling a bit dissappointed. Thee wasn't
any real closure. And yeah, I know, the thrid fic is yet to come...

- Mike of No Particular Title or Handle
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/      \  l        Trier - LA - LV - Kiev - Reno - Hong Kong. Fnord.
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