More C & C from my fanfic archives on my HD.
Edgar
by Nick Maragos
Grammar rating:  9  Nick Maragos is a master, I think, at composition.
   Plot/story rating:  9  Nicks Final fantasy stories are always good,
including this one.
Character rating:  8 Very true to the original, and excellent
development.
humor:  none that I found
seriousness: none
lemon:  I dont think so...
overall: 8.9
Nicks Final Fantasy stories are all excellent I think.  Try them, of
course, you have to like final Fantasy 3.
Furinkan Summer #1
By John Biles
Grammar: 8  I did see some typos...
Story: 9  come on, this is John Biles...
Character rating:  8  The characters were true to the original despite
all the changes he made... However, I still dont think Kodachi is that
good.   Maybe I dont know Kodachi that well.
Humor: 8 I actually laughed a little
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overall 8.2
Heart of the Family
By Richard Lawson
Grammar:  6  This is the first draft I read so the grammar should be
bad.  Also, even though this is the first draft, dont put Japanese if
you dont know how you uses it!  It make me cringe every time Kasumi
called her younger siblings oneechan.  Also, I really didnt decoded this
>from MIME.
Story:  9  Very Nice
Character:  9  Travel through the mind of Kasumi and it was very very
good.  This fanfic will be the basis of some my future fanfics.
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overall: 9  Just learn some Japanese and youll be all right.  Of course,
I never did read the final version....
The UY Connection
by Karl Rim
Grammar:  ?  Too funny to think  about grammar
Story:  9  really cool crossover
characters: 9 read it... nuff said
Humor: 10  I thought this was extremely funny stuff.  Of course you have
to know the characters.
overall: 9
The Misadventures of the Foreign Exchange student
Pat  Conley
Grammar:  8 no big problems  little confusing few times
Story. 7 I really like it from the beginning, but when he and his sister
started kicking the characters butts... it got way out of hand.
Characters:  6  This guy is too perfect.  Beth is more perfect.. makes
me sick
Humor: 5  Only thing funny about this was that flawlessness of Pat
Overall: 6.5  I love these type stories,  but I think Pat went a little
too far.  It made me sick near the end on how perfect he was.  Not to
mention Beth.  She was more perfect than the main character.  It was
funny in the beginning, and I was beginning to like this character, but
he became too perfect.  This guys character was so perfect, he made Crys
Schroeder look like Ataru (from  Urusei Yatsura)