1. 3x3E : New Begning revision by entropy@break.com.au (*****)
This was EXCELLENT. However, it might not make much sense if
you have never seen Sanzan Eyes (3X3). I really like the 
first person perspective and the in-depth analysis of what 
Yakumo was ecperiencing. I thought your storyline was also
very well thought out. Is there going to be a sequel, or is
this more of a "Figure it out yourself" type story? Either
way, it is well done.

heya misa, yeah #2 is in the works.


  "P-Pai??" I said, staring in disbelief.
  "GETOUT YAKUMO!!" she squeled, not knowing exactly where I was
standing.  For all she knew I walked through the wall and not the
door.

  I was standing in the bathroom doorway tho, just STARING at a
gloriously naked Pai comming out of the shower, and the first
thing to hit me was her beautiful long black hair that fell down
her back, it was the first time I've ever seen her with her hair
down...  I could have looked elsewhere and thats what I focused
on....  I blushed furiously and backpeddled out the door, giving
her back her privacy.


written on the spur of the moment right then... i have no idea where
that fits in yet, if at all as i just scrapped the all of #2 that i
did have :|


-df

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