Ranma, of course, just assumes that Ukyou is male, and has to approach in
Ranko form - which will not have the expected result, as Ukyou is also a
girl. Just seethes with possibilities for misunderstandings before each
finds out the truth about the other.
Gah! *Thank You*! This is *great*. I didn't think of all the
possibilities in this - now I can't *wait*! :)
Who know? Maybe Ukyou is broad minded enough to want to marry Ranko anyway
- after all, she *is* male half the time!
The whole fiancee's relationships will be a little more subtle that in
the original - except Shampoo, of course, to whom "subtle" means using
only *one* bonbori.
Ranko: Sweet lemons from Australia! Sometimes I think Kasumi is
having us all on.
BWAH ha ha ha ha ha ha!
Strangely enough, I didn't see a reaction from The True Owner Of This
List, yet. :)
*****
Ranko: [hisses] I may not be a real boy, but I know this: If a girl trusts
you, and you have a single shred of honour in your body, you don't betray
that trust. Akane trusts P-chan. Now, taking advantage of this to gain
access to her body would be an *ugly* thing to do. You won't betray her
trust. Do you understand me? Nod once for 'yes', turn blue and die for 'no'.
Thank you - This sums up muy feelings on Ryouga *perfectly* - Ranma makes a
darn *good* girl, ne?
She doesn't mince words. And she *really, really* likes Akane. :)
*****
She ducks into a side street, hoping that her pursuitor missed her change
^^^^^^^^^
of direction. Unfortunately, by looking over her shoulder she misses the
fact that there is a big, wooden tank of water ahead.
Another Freudian slip?
Actually, I stole that from the Viz title (I think) of a part of the
original Manga.
ROFL... This is a *wonderful* dig. Just one question? At what point did
Tofuu sensei find out about Ranma/Ranko and the curse - heretofore it seems
like he has regarded them as separate people. (I know he knows in the
manga, but the circumstances where he learned it didn;t happen here, or am
I forgetting something?)
I have no idea when he learns in the manga. He just seemed to know
suddenly, so I assumed that he must have found out sometime between
stories. With Ranko's frequent trips to the clinic, It was bound to
happen pretty soon.
Ranma: No way! Think of last time we went here!
WAITAMINNIT! Just what *does* Ranma remember about the last time? He
doesn't know anything about being a girl anymore, does he?
In fact I thought of adding a scene where Akane listens amazedly to
Ranma's vague and warped recount of the events in part 14. But that
would have made this part too long - I try to keep them approximately as
long as one part of the manga. That's also why I don't like long graphic
fighting scenes, since they make the file so short. :)
"We could learn from this"
"I will stay with her"
"I don't want to hurt her" and
"I look like a man!"
What do you think? Which one would be best?
Actually... none of them. I like the existing title to this section...
OK, I'll consider keeping it.
Boy - talk about your MPD - Jaclyn Hyde Syndrome!
Err, what's that? This one went over my head, I'm afraid.
Looking forward to the next part!
Zen-
Thanks, Zen. Your comments are very helpful and I cherish every positive
word. :)
Sebastian