At 01:57 26/06/96 -0700, you wrote:

1. Sailor Moon Heretics Part 1-- by walker@mail.accent.net
**--- this fic has a LOT of potential, but the descriptions
that would enrich the story just aren't there. This story
is extremly jumpy, and you might want to work on
smoothing it... Also, there were a LOT of spelling
errors or wrong words such as:
Pax: I feel a presence that...that I Haven't felt sense...
sense=since
I would give this story 3 stars if the spelling and
descriptions were better.
Same comments for part 2-- you should really read
through and look for grammar and spelling mistakes
and spellcheck.
Moon: Tuxedo Kaman-sama!
it is Tuxedo KamEn

Hmmmm...well, I did write it right before I started my scipt writing unit in
Writers Craft, so 3+ have more discription...
It'a also writin as a TV ep script, so that's why it's jumpy.
Spelling has alwas been my biggest problem, but even though I ran it through
my spellchecker, and gave them to a bunch of my friends, I though I got all
the Spelling mistakes.....(Anyways, I'm Dyslixic..."




Geoff Walker, The Tyrant Pax, Hentai Omega, Megumi Shirow-sama
Offical Grand Inqusistor Of the Cult of Nabiki Tendo
"Well, there goes the buisness, Hyuck! At least I got 
paid!"
	- Nabiki, Tendo Christmass Scramble

"Onward Bugrom Soldiers, Onward Muldoon Preistess, onwards Shadow tribsmen,
fight till you're deceased."

"Dammit Luigi, you told me to take a left at the Gallera, and now I'm her
flying over F*cking Mt. Fuji...I don't even think that Mt. Fuji is IN Canada"

"And Di iz how ve Say good-bye in Germany, dokter Jones."