1. Sailor Moon Heretics Part 1-- by walker@mail.accent.net
**--- this fic has a LOT of potential, but the descriptions
that would enrich the story just aren't there. This story
is extremly jumpy, and you might want to work on
smoothing it... Also, there were a LOT of spelling
errors or wrong words such as:
Pax: I feel a presence that...that I Haven't felt sense...
sense=since
I would give this story 3 stars if the spelling and
descriptions were better.
Same comments for part 2-- you should really read
through and look for grammar and spelling mistakes
and spellcheck.
Moon: Tuxedo Kaman-sama!
it is Tuxedo KamEn



2. "Heart of Ice, Sword of Fire" Parts 1 and 2 by Hino Rei
**** (as always) I love your fics :)
with a spinning back kick to the chin. The guard falled to the ground, 
falled=fell
his keys falling into the possession of the ninja, who left without a 
second thought.
A minute later she heard the faint sound of electric motors, oversized 
though they were.
HUH? This sentence doesn't make a lot of sense
She congradgulated herself, then moved on.
congradgulated=congratulated ^_^
various other errors... read through and spellcheck...


3. "Just A Day in the Woods" (episode #16) by Hino Rei
**** good stuff again :) spelling was much better this
time....

4. Losses Parts 1,2,3 ***** by Isabel Arantes
Part 3
 He had dark hair, a few long bags falling just above his eyes.
bags=bangs
	3) Sorry the story ain't so hot. I too find my lack of vocabulary
	frustrating as I can't write as well as I woud like. But even if my
	writting isn't as good as others, I love to write and I'll stick to
	it 'till I get it right. :)
I loved this story... you are doing a spectacular job of writing this...!
PLEASE stick to it!!!
5) Special thanks goes to myself! Hey, I wrote the damn thing! ^_^
 Also, thanks to Naoko Takeuchi, who thanks to her SM manga
 I've been  able to learrn a good deal of katakana, and showed me
 the beauty of romances.
	ARE THERE any translations to the manga on the net
anywhere?