here's some more.  I don't think the last one got through
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RESOLUTIONS 1- ALL GOOD THINGS
by Plunger
Grammar:  7  Hmmm, I saw some spelling errors.
Story:  8.8  Nice story.  Flowed nicely
Character:  6.9  Ranma, Akane, and Ukyou seemed to be themselves.
Others... I thought you exaggerated a little.  Wow, Kasumi has a dark
side to her, she says  hatever,  ush,  and such....   and not a mention
of h my..  Im not saying that she should be like that, but if she has
more than one line... let her talk the way her character is portrayed.
Of course, I shouldnt say that because I was very liberal with Kasumi in
my fanfics.  Oh... you want to see an example of this use of Kasumi,
read eart Of the Family.  I didnt give you a 6.9 cuz of Kasumi.  A lot
more factors went in also.
Humor: 4  not much
Drama:  4 not much of that either
Lemon: 0.8 the part when Shampoo and Ranma went on the date.  :)
Overall. 8.2    John Biles: For writing the brilliant "Putting Your
Heart in the Right Place" and causing me to say, "I can do that!" (maybe
not as well).  Thats strange, I said that when I read lseworlds.  You
obviously have few of John Biless style. But the difference between
Johns and yours is the way he treats his characters.  But be different,
use your own particular style.  Oh yea, I love happy endings as much as
tragic ones.  I liked your ending.
CHILDHOODS END
 by Lizsue
Grammar: 7  Needs to be better organized.  Caping all of the letters in
Characters names really hurt the flow I think... for me anyway.
Story: 7  Interesting story...  it could have been better if it was more
organized.  The story flow was a little choppy.
Character: 6
Humor:  5  Not much of it
Drama:  8  That ending was... I dont know how to put it.
No Lemon
Overall: 7.  Ranma dies.... cool!  I was waiting till that  day came.
But in a way, a sad ending.  But I dont know if that was intended to be
a sad ending or not.  I felt, when I was reading this, that you didn't
really care about this fanfic.
HEMISPHERES PT 1-5
by Chris Schumacher
Grammar: 8
Story:  9  Very good ending I thought.
Character:  7
Humor: 9  Lots and lots of obscure jokes.  I couldnt get all of them,
but they are funny.  I love evil Ranmas personality.
Drama:  8  The ending is dramatic enough
No Lemon
Overall: 9  This is the most common storyline for Ranma other than Ranma
and Akanes Wedding.   Basic twin/evil twin type story.  This is like
Benears Two Sides of a Coin and Takahashis own version.  The Takahashis
I couldnt get (Probably my Japanese deficiency), Benearss was excellent,
and this was good maybe better than Benearss.  Good job Chris.
KODACHI 1/2 - JUSENKYO MUYO! : FIRST NIGHT (and a day)
By Christopher Willmore
Grammar: 7
Story:  8  only the first part, could get interesting.
Character: 7
Humor:  2  Yawn, was that suppose to be a joke?
Drama: 0.00003  Ohhh, Ranmas apparent death
Lemon:  You dont do lemons
Overall: 7  Good but not great
 RANMA1/2
KODIAKS FATE
By  Ento.
Grammar:  4  You capitalize proper nouns you know.   Spell check if you
have it.  Other mistakes that should have been corrected.
Story:  5 I read this somewhere...  Ah!! The Crys Saga!!
Character: 5 Gee, that Kodiak is too ignorant for my taste.  (Sorry)
Humor: 4
Drama: 0.1 if you count the atom bomb explosion
Lemon:  Nahhhh
Overall: 5  Your first fanfic.  My first was also a Crys Saga type
fanfic.  I realized how stupid and similar it was to the Crys Saga, I
rewrote the whole thing and made it a parody.  Youll do better later on,
trust me..
KIMAGURE ORANGE ROAD
WHO DO YOU LOVE PART 1
by Kokoro
Grammar: 7
Story: 6 Lemon story.
Character: 6 This is a Lemon story, they are not suppose to act
themselves.  Although the first few paragraphs seemed to be similar to
the manga.
Humor:  I didnt see any
Drama:  5 eh,
Lemon:  5
Overall:  5.9  Not good enough to get a 6.  I have to see pt 2 for that.
 Lemon story and it was pretty boring except the Orange Road- ness in
the beginning.