Putting Your Heart in the Right Place 1-15

1-15??  i don't think i ever got that many parts...or
did I?

anyways, not a bad fic, not bad at all.  in fact, downright
good. :)  but...

Yet there are also a few things that nobody in their right
mind would think of.  Gosunkugi is given a realistic
character (John mentions this idea was what keyed off the
whole series), and gets a magical girlfriend (!).  

the thought of her saddens me.  she seemed quite unhappy
throughout the entire series.

The running around as mice.  

definately cool.

Basically, what John does is take the two-dimensionalish
characters in Ranma and give them substance, so that we do 
cheer when Ranma chooses Akane, or when, at the end, 

Nabiki
seduces Ryouga.

my reaction wasn't too cool about that part.
i don't remember why...i think i'll download it
again and re-read it.

Overall, not a bad way to start your Ranma fanfiction life.

yeah, considering that's where i started mine.

signed, phoneynt
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