Ok, this is my first review of a fanfic! I'm going to do Price of 
Victory(at least I think it's the title.)

Anyway, I do think that this would fit well in the elsewhere worlds 
series. Something like where Mousse wished that Ranma never beat Shampoo 
at all.

One Problem, all of the Elswhere worlds, at least from what I remember, 
at in script format, which this isn't.

Anyway, it's almost mid night so I'll cut this short! 

                            
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