I'm sorry, but this didn't make much sense.  I got the idea that Ranma was 
fighting some wizard guy, but I didn't understand the part about ran-chan at the 
end.  Isn't Ranma already unconscious/dead by then?  Anyway, if your goal was to confuse 
the reader, then it has succeeded.  I would hope that the later parts clarify this, 
though.  


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"RANMA NO BAKA!" Akane Tendo, Ranma 1/2

"Power only breeds war ... I wish I'd never been born." Celes Chere, Final Fantasy 3

Don Wang <dwang@sprynet.com>
RPG, strategy game, and Ranma 1/2 fan.