Subject: Re: [FFML] [fanfic] Ranko 1/2 pt.23 "Is easy" (draft)
From: phoenix@conch.aa.msen.com (Michael H Carlson)
Date: 7/13/1996, 11:28 AM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

I am likeing this better all the time.  It is finally starting to go into
it's own direction.
A couple of questions:  Why and how did Kuno get into the Tendo Dojo?   I
do not believe he would or could enter when he did.

Why is Nabiki helping out without getting paid?  That is no like her in the
regular storyline?


Keep it up.

Phoenix Ikki