At 09:44 PM 8/2/96 -0700, you wrote:

Hi Ento, ;)

 Oh, this is a non-private c&c, just overview, etc.  

 Lost Memories part 6 is cool, one question, Where's 1-5 and 7-infinity?

 One suggestion, bored and not board. ;)  You kept using board, which is
a flat piece of something.  I think you might have meant someone who
wanted something to do... ie, bored. ;)

 Another neg comment is that the characters seem to just be dragged along
with no true purpose.  Ie, they do stuff, stuff happens, but no real plot.
It's like leafs being blown in the wind. -_-  Sorry for the neg comments,
just thought it was noticable.

 Positive comments. It was rather smooth and uncluttered in the way it is
written, being a cluttered writer myself. ^_^;;  I like the refreshing
format you have decided to use... it makes reading much easier even though
it makes printing a bit heavy in the paper usage department. ^_^;;

 The young lady introduced... Ka... something?  I sense a little romance
there. ;)  Oh yeah... I -loved- the enema/nene mixup. ^_^;; *giggles*
Enema dreams... that would be interesting... hehe...

 Well, that's all I have to say... and I'm sure Ranma would be incredibly
happy about that. ;)  Btw, is this Kain the one from Tenchi In Love?

You can get ahold of 1-5 at my home page and I am working on 7.
I can see how this one would of dragged on if you didn't read 1-5...
Yes i meant bored..

Thank you SOOOO much for the c&c. I really havent been getting any at all...

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