Subject: Re: [FFML] One Bad Day [Ranma][Fanfic][1st Draft]
From: Cynewulf
Date: 8/2/1996, 12:37 AM
To: Sebastian Weinberg
CC: fanfic@fanfic.com


:                            One Bad Day
:
:      You had a bad day once, am I right?  I know I am.  I can tell.
: You had a bad day and everything changed.
:       Why else would you dress up like a flying rat?
: -     The Joker, from The Killing Joke.

Good book.  I've got both the english original and the german
translation.  The original has the *real* text, and the
translation has better printing on good paper stock. :)

	Yeah, one of my favorite Batman stories...ranks right up there 
with The Dark Knight Returns, Batman/Grendel, and Arkham Asylum.   
Oops... getting off topic.  Thanks, so for the C&C.  I'll put it to good 
use when I get around to the revision.
	Actually, while I'm at it... I'd like to thank everyone who 
responded.  I got quite a bit of _very_ helpful C&C - heck, I should've 
joined up _long_ ago!

	Later!
	-Mike

It works fine in this version, though I would have liked it
better, if Akane had been able to convince Ranma that the answer
to his problems doesn't lie out there, but always where the
problems lie themselves.

	Actually, I kinda like that.  Maybe I'll find a way of working it 
in.  The final confrontation scenes need a _lot_ of work.  Thanks!