Well here it is the Alpha of Mechwarrior Team Jusenkyo Chapter 3. Hope you
enjoyed it.
VERY good!!!!! poor ranma -_-
please don't use word wrap in the final ver... :(
It took me a long, _long_ time to write this one because I wanted to show
how some of the characters felt
because of what happened in chapter 2. This is not an easy thing to do
because if you don't plan the
dialogue well, you end up making yourself look stupid and you deviate from
an otherwise pretty good
plan dialogue? you actually plan it? i just have them say what they have
to say and then make a few revisions ^_^ .. how do you plan dialogue and how
does it help?
story. For everyone who has commented on this story to date I would like
to say "Thank you." It's your
comments and criticisms that let me continue writing this long. I hope I
didn't let you down.
The next chapter will be the final one in this series and will finish off
the duel with the clans, as well as
several other things. I'm not giving away any details at the moment, but I
hope you like it.
The Ranma 1/2 characters as well as the characters Yuta and Mana are the
property of Rumiko Takahashi
yuta and mana are from ranma 1/2?
and the company who publishes them. Battletech and all related equipment,
planets, etc. are the property
of the FASA corporation.
gonna go play some 6 player NetMech now ^_^
*spam alert*
netmech players...
try customizing a direwolf...give him nothing but machine guns all
over...then use group fire to fire all of them at once and you can
take off legs and arms like popcorn! autocannons work even better...
signed, phoney-nt
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