(Ranchan takes the floor and decides he had better get dressed for the part.
He puts on a whicked looking mech suit.  After he has fully armoured himself
he looks at himself in a conveniently placed mirror and decides it isn't
enough.  He straps alot of pillows to his body and finishes the ensemble
with a bucket over his helmet.)

Okay, now that I have protection I'd like to start by saying, Mr.
Lawson...you are one sick and twisted puppy.  Personally I like it.  The
thing about the story that makes it the weirdest is...(Ranchan braces
himself for the inevetible bludgeoning he is about to receive from the
"Lovers of Kasumi organization.")  it is completely feasible(did I spell
that right?)


After reading this something popped into my head...what do we really know
about Kasumi.  She's kind, no doubt.  She's friendly, sure.  She's someone
you would trust implicitrly, no question.  But what do we know about her?
She runs the house does all the work cooks dinner, what does she do in her
spare time?  We also know she has some interset in medicine as she is always
borrowing books from Tofu.  I like many other writers have this belief that
there is much more to Kasumi than meets the eye.  One writer went so far as
to say she was a mage in her free time, heck could be.  For all we know
maybe Kasumi is a maniacal phsychotic killer.  Maybe she's a hitman or
somethin'.  Her motto: "They'll be dead by dinner, guaranteed.  I have a
family to cook for."

Since I'm on this tangent, what exactly is it that Soun does?  Sure he owns
the Dojo, but have you ever actually seen a student there.  Where is all his
free time spent?  What is it he does?  Ditto for Genma.  Nabiki too.  Heck
the whole Tendo Dojo could be a cover for the families Yakuza activities.

Anyways, I've blabbed for long enough, just had to get that off my chest.
Once again I'd like to commend Mr. Lawson on a job well done.  I really
enjoyed the story.  My only complaint is it could have been a little longer.  

Kudos.

Ja ne!!

Ran-chan

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Lucas "RANCHAN" Muzzatti
Science student at U of T     "Don't look at A-ZU-SA!!" Azusa Shiratori
ranchan@mail.accent.net
                 
                 Member of the Church of Ryoga:
   Protector of Akane while Ryouga's Lost and Ranma's not Around

                 Member of the Church of Azusa:
 High priest, keeper of Kawaii and holder of the dictionary of stupid 
                          french names.

Join now, and you get to give up a treasured object of your very own to
                the Goddess Azusa!  Or she'll kill you!
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