Subject: Re: [FFML]"Needs & Desires"/"Appearances"
From: Matthew Trotter
Date: 8/15/1996, 10:22 AM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

When I first posted my attempt at a lemon, "Needs and Desires", the
response was resounding silence.  Well, that's not true; I did get a few
thoughtful responses.  But not nearly as much as I usually get, which
makes me believe that the story wasn't good.  Plus I managed to offend
Kun-chan in the process.  So it was my plan to never work on it again,
and to move on to other things.

Ok, I'd like to state that my silence was due to the fact that I hadn't 
gone on a fanfic reading spree very recently.  I did today...well ok I 
read three...go ahead try and guess which three...ok anyway.  I actualy 
liked needs and desires.  Though I thought the sex was over stressed.  
Less blatant sex please.  Also the safe sex conversation at the prom was 
kinda cheesy.


So I thought I'd ask y'all, the ones who stayed silent:  What did you
think, really, of that story?  Should it die and never see the light of
day?  Was it so-so, maybe okay but not okay?  Or is it that you just
don't like lemons in general? (I actually fall into that category.)

I'm against fresh fruit.  Though the story part wasn't bad. (then again 
I'm one of those Nabiki/Kuno fanboys)I'd like to see a less lemony 
version.

And of course Appearances, evil, evil, evil....yet strangely appealing.  
good job on that one.
   -MJT