Okay, for some reason, I can't send this to the actual author (why 
doesn't your address work?), so I'm sending it to the list. David, I hope 
you see this!

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Raphael See

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Date: Fri, 23 Aug 1996 10:44:44 -0700 (MST)
From: SEE <raphael@IMAP1.ASU.EDU>
To: "David H. Lee" <davelee@davelee.student.princeton.edu>
Subject: Re: [FFML] [FFML] [Ranma] The New Arrival: Chapter 1

     Hmmm...you've got an interesting start here...I'm glad you haven't 
overpowered yourself (yet) or anything...
    So I'm to assume that you're the demon (either by design or my some 
cruel mix-up) that's supposed to make Ranma miserable? Great! Lotsa lotsa 
mayhem in store...Oh, and do you know Japanese? You seem to be conversing 
with everyone else quite easily. 
    Sorry that I don't have anything really useful to say about your 
story in terms of improving it; but keep writing, you've got the makings 
of something interesting here. :)
    Of course, what do I know? I've only started my first fanfic myself 
(Shameless Plug Alert: Read "Scoop of the Day," two parts currently 
availible...Ouch! <sound of ego being beat back into "normal" 
proportions>). How's it feel, seeing your story on the list for everyone 
to see? Great, huh?? :)
    Keep writing!

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Raphael See