Subject: Re: [FFML] [FFML]{Fanfic][Ranma 1/2] El Ranma, Part 1
From: Ifurita
Date: 8/23/1996, 11:48 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com
CC: bkogawa@primenet.com

At 19:22 23/08/96 -0700, you wrote:

See... I'm forgetful.

You git...


That last sentence is a sentence fragment.

I'll tell you right here..I completly Ignore grammer checks that people do...I
am a awful speller, and My Grammers not to good...and I try very hard to
write things properly....


... one of the outer buildings ... 

Actaully, I've always called them Out buildings...


This scene was funny.

My Scean, or the Origonal?


The Kasumi in this fic is pretty funny.  When I realized that she was
going to be the analog for the teacher, I thought that was going to be
pretty funny... it got funnier when the thing she had to avoid
was... cleaning!  Very funny.

And Cooking....To replace smoking and Drinking...


How big is a Canadian football field?

I don't know....But 6 American Feilds equile 5 Canadain...


Inside Canadian joke?  Hm? Hm? HMMM?  :) :) :)

Yes...


Followed, of course, by an American joke. :)

Naturaly?


BTW: I like the way that both Kuno and Nabiki take Jinnai's
place... it seems to work out pretty well, with Nabiki being the
calculating part and Kuno the crazy part.

I know...at first It was just going to be kuno...But he wasn;t smart Enough
to to it....Nabiki fits fine...


Good to know Ranma's not completely changed.

Heh...Wait till Ura shows up...


Hey...  I wanted to see what happens when Ranma (as a guy,
impersonating Fatora), gets splashed with water and changes into a
girl (who happens to NOT look like Fatora).  Or, a girl-Ranma who
looks like Fatora (so that he has to stay in cursed form).  Or
something like that!

That was and Idea...but then....Haveing Alielle discover Ranma idenity couldn't 
work with Ranma having to say tin Girl form...I just like Alielle's expression
when she reaches into the pants...


On the other hand, Ranma seems happy about this change. :)

Very..


Hm... Kasumi's not so dumb, huh?

Just just didn't have to think before...


I like this, but I don't see how it happened... what has made Ranma
come to this conclusion?  I think there should be scenes where Kasumi
get's a chance to cook and then loses her powers, or something like
that... otherwise, it's harder to see how this happened.

But, Does it have to make sense?


"Ranma, have you suddenly become significantly more intelligent?"
asked Bryan.  Seriously, he does seem a lot smarter than before... or
at least, not quite so dense.  I know you warned us about the changes,
so don't mind me.

Yes, yes...he gets momentary bouts of Intellignce...


This was one of the funnier scenes from El Hazard, and it's still
funny here. :) :)

I'm glad I kept the humor of my two fave anime's...

                        


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			    Ifurita

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