Greetings!

Good overall, but I can not get why you stopped at the part where Skyknight 
had the bomb on his chest, and suddenly went to 'later'. I hope you intend to 
add some story in there before the final setup...

That's why it says <later...> at that point in the story....I haven't
written the aftermath yet.  ^_^

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Bert Van Vliet   SkyKnght@sentex.net
[http://www.jurai.net/~skyknght/index.html]
[Alias SkyKnight: Knight-in-Shining Armour, Punster at large, Die-Hard
Bubblegum Crisis Fan, and writer of Really Long Fanfics!]
"I have a very firm grip on reality....I can reach out and strangle it
anytime I want to!"    ^_^