Subject: RE: [FFML] [FFML] Bubblegum Zone #10
From: "Doug Murphy" <Draxon-X@msn.com>
Date: 8/30/1996, 7:06 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

Good overall, but I can not get why you stopped at the part where Skyknight 
had the bomb on his chest, and suddenly went to 'later'. I hope you intend to 
add some story in there before the final setup...