I like NextGen stories, and this one, so far, looks like it could
be the best of the crop (loath as I am to admit it).
       I do wonder a bit at the power levels displayed.  Casual use of
Chi-bolts and special moves can make the story read like a video game.  I
suggest toning things down a bit, or being more moderate.

        As far as I know there's only been one chi bolt used and that was
in chapter 1 by Megumi, I tried to keep the power levels believable for the
first fight.  It was mostly a matter of speed and endurance.  Using certain
abilities is very draining for them, hence no chi bolts.  I've placed their
power levels above Ranma at the beginning of the series but well below
Ranma from the end of the series.(no horizontal hiryushotenha or other such
nonsense.)  The amaguriken was the first 'special' technique and it's
relatively simple.

       Your take on Ranma shows him to be quite the playboy.  Did Ukyou
leave "for family" or because she was in a family way?  If Kodachi
appears with a child, I will be very, very frightened.

        Sometimes things just happen... how and why... well those will be
covered later on.  Ranma has been happily married for 17 years but honestly
he was quite the playboy in the original series.  However this is a subject
for a different 'lemon' fic and in my fanfic he's simply human.
        Kodachi, well.. no plans to bring her in yet.. but ya never know...

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